Blog #18

For my revision plan there are many things I can improve. After receiving many very helpful comments from my peer review I decided to look over my whole essay instead of focusing on one specific area. My goal is to work on using better evidence from podcasts and articles. Going along with this I really … [Read more…]

Blog #16

Free Write: https://psmag.com/news/when-obsession-with-beauty-becomes-a-disease  After doing more research, I chose a new article written by Kate Silver called “When Obsession With Beauty Becomes a Disease”. This article states the influence the media has on how people view what outer beauty should look like. I think this article touches on a subject that is not only is … [Read more…]

Blog #15

Throughout the article I chose, the author Kevin Loria expresses what it means to be happy and expands on that by stating things that are common things or ways that make people happy. I think happiness is very important and quite beautiful especially to share with someone. The research shows that there are many ways … [Read more…]

Blog #10

The idea of STEM has been used in the education system and many schools for quite a while and changing it now to STEAM is not necessary. STEM is an acronym for science, technology, engineering, and math. Yo-Yo Ma states in his essay that it is important to encourage the use of art in a … [Read more…]